I think It was a very clever storyline, the beginning where she gets shot is a tad confusing and I'm not entirely sure how it links in with the rest of the film. and at the end the editing makes it look like she's making the girl get hit by the bus instead of saving her but apart from that it was really good. And I especially liked the shots in the centre of town.
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Nothing here - ? You need to make urgent changes to the ending as I suggested.
ReplyDeleteI think It was a very clever storyline, the beginning where she gets shot is a tad confusing and I'm not entirely sure how it links in with the rest of the film. and at the end the editing makes it look like she's making the girl get hit by the bus instead of saving her but apart from that it was really good. And I especially liked the shots in the centre of town.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVp3XXGRyU4&list=UUU79jmI2jbMIYynbiZ1tHSg&index=11&feature=plcp
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